Shakespeare park was amazing!

On Sunday the 6th of November 2016, Taniela woke me up around 5:00 0’ clock in the morning because were going on a trip. It was so early in the morning. After we packed our clothes, hats, chair and tent,  we were ready to go.I was very excited because my family and I  were going on a long trip to Shakespeare cove.
When we got there, we hopped out of the car and  put our things in the cupboard on the bus. . After  we had put our things away, I went inside and looked for a chair for my mum and I to sit. After that, we waited for the rest of my family to come. Soon they all arrived.

When we were all in the bus , my aunty said too the bus driver, “We could go now because everyone is here!”. On our way our way to Shakespeare we came passed  a city and I saw some people walking and people driving their cars.

When we got there, the bus driver parked the bus on the grass, we hopped out of the bus and grabbed our things and then we went to find a shady spot where us children could play. our thing then we went and sat on a shady spot were we could see the kids play. My mum told me to go and get the fala  for my nana, aunty, cousins and to si on, so I did.

Later on I asked my mum if I go with Siu, Nisha, Moala, Chloe and Kylie for a swim.  I was allowed  to change into my blue and white polka dotted togs, I really  liked the colour. After I got change, my cousin Siu told me to go into the in the water but I didn’t want to because it might be cold, so  I asked her if the water was warm and she said, “It’s warm !”So I went in and it  was very warm. My cousin Siu splashed some water to my face and I splashed it back  at her when she splashed me and the water the water went inside my mouth. It was not tasty because it tasted salty and yucky.

When I was playing in  the water my nana and aunties came in as well  because it was very hot and sunny. I asked my auntie if she could lean back and I would hold her back and keep her afloat. She said,  “Yes!” So I held her back for a little while. After a  while , the water became cold so my nana, cousins and I decided to go to the deeper end where it was warmer. My aunty gave me a child’s surfboard for me because it was a little bit deep so I grab it and I kept moving my legs like a duck paddling in the water.

When we’ve tried ourselves out in the water, my cousins Jayden told my cousins and I to go and have something to eat. Soon  I needed to go to the bathroom, so I got change while I was in there. After I changed out of my clothes, I had some sapasui , crab salad with potato, hopa, sipi and lu, it was very tasty and delicious because I ate it  with taro and kumara.

After we finished eating, we decided to have a game of soccer versing each other. I was in Jayden’s team and we named our team ‘Fear’. I was a great goalie and Jayden and Vita were doing all sorts of soccer tricks. Every time the ball came back to my team hoping that they would get a goal.While we were were still on the field I asked Vita if we could play Touch and  he said, “Yes!” I was very happy that we played Touch because I have really missed playing that cool game. After the game started Jayden gave me the ball and so I ran towards the grass and I scored a goal. We were so excited that  out of 0 we had a goal.

had so much fun at Shakespeare's regional park On our way back home I fell asleep because I was tired

My favourite part was when I played with my cousins because it was a lot of fun I wish I could go there again for my  11th birthday.

Learning intention: We are learning to use descriptive language.

Success Criteria: I know I can do when I use adjectives to describe my trip to Shakespeare park.